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Ok I guess

Kinda booring though. Nothing keeping my intrest for long, but good work on the animation

I still hate stick figures

I watch this one, and number one, like i said the animation is great, the art work needs work. I like the series though, and if you are going to continue using stick figures may I offer a few suggestions.

1) Make the teams diffrent colors. Once the action heats up its hard to tell who is who, especially in part one.

2)Use more weapons. I would like to see a lightsabe in the next one ;)

3) Try to at least create the background having a little more depth. In other words dont use real images, just dont make them look so plain.

4)Add a liitle (NOT TOO MUCH)Interactivity. something that maybe the watcher could do at the end.

5)Lastly I loved the homer simpson scream in the 3rd one. Add some more voice sounds, but make sure they are good and really fit in.

Thats all for my ramblings. I hope you follow some of the suggestions, as I feel they would make them flash films better for all.

Heh I hate stick figures

But your animation skills make it worth watching. Very smooth and fluid motion. If your artistic skills matched your animation skills you could be one of the greatest NG has ever seen.

Pretty Sweet

This is the second movie by you i voted on today. Not bad. You have alot of talent. I like your films, and the work you seem to put into them. I also Like sprites. (even the soft drink):)

The only problems I had with this flick were the text was someties hard to read,(wish it would have had voices) And i think the story got dull at certain points. I would have like to have seen more of the enimies, and a few of the bosses.

Over all good work though. Keep em comming.

WOW thats too cool

Man the time it must have taken to create this.
Very good work. kept my intrest, was well animated, And it was a very good cross over. This is going into my fav submissions.

I would have loved it even MORE if it would have had some Interactivity.

Great work man. If everyone one put as much effort into their flash submissions as you do, everything on NG's would score perfectly.

In my review im giving it 5

because it still needs alot of work. But its a pretty good first shot.

I see in your profile you live in kingwood tx, when im just up the road in good old porter. so since your my neighbor I'll be nice and not diss your film, but I think it has potential.

I like sprites

good use of them too. Very good film, could be a little more involved in a story, but otherwise pretty fair flick.

DarkDisguise responds:

thanks dude!!
yea actually just a fight with no meening but more is coming soon see ya!!

Great animation

but pretty boring. The charactor intro took way too long, and there really isnt enough to keep intrest for long.

Damn fine animation, maybe with some better story line I would score it higher.

I NEED MORE

i need part 4. I love this series
great work.

Pretty good

I gave this an overall score of 7, and voted 4. There is alot of room I can see for improvement. Better sound and video quality to start. Adding some depth to the story would hurt either ;)

Other wise it was really good. I can Imagine the time and effort it must have taken to create this film. Great Job. I look forward to seeing more of your works.

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